2.24.2016

Revised draft / blog 33

The Magic To Change

What can a friendship bring to people?A strong and intense friendship can usually improve a person from a lot of aspects, his personality, his habits and even his principles; it is clearly shown in the novel Me And You and the movie The Lion, The Witch and The Wardrobe. In the novel Me And You, Lorenzo was an antisocial boy who did not have any relationship with people other than his parents or grandma; but after he met Olivia, who is his half sister, her sickness because addiction to drugs had aroused Lorenzo's sympathy and hopes to be a more optimistic person. Similar to Lorenzo, Edmund is also one of the main character in the movie The Lion, The Witch and The Wardrobe; he had changed from a selfish and improvident boy that only cared about his own benefit to a real strong and sagacious emperor of Narnia after Aslan, the true king of Narnia sacrificed himself for saving Edmund's life and establishing a true deep friendship with him. These two stories tell us that a true relationship with others is very precious; no matter what kind of person or race he is, they could still change you slightly and eventually through love and friendship.

Lorenzo, the protagonist in the novel Me And You, is a teenage boy who changed from an introversive kid who doesn't care about anyone to a boy who has love, hope and determination after establishing a relationship with Olivia, his half sister. It shows how an intense relationship can give a person hope and change his personality entirely. In this novel, Lorenzo was a kid with some mental disorders. He did not care about anyone else instead of his parents and his grandma, and didn't know how to make friends. Even though he was very smart, he still couldn't handle his emotion especially his rage. He pretended to be a wasp that "had managed to trick them all, integrating perfectly with the waspian society"(Ammaniti 37) in his school in order to make his mother satisfy about him making friends. After he met Olivia, his half sister and spent the whole week with her in the basement, a huge change had occurred on him. It says in the book that after he saw Olivia feeling very suffering, he "hugged her and leaned [his] forehead against her neck, [his] nose on her collarbone, and [he] burst into tears"(Ammaniti 110). This is the first time of him thinking and caring about someone who is not his parents or grandma. He starts to care for others that are not related to him, and he wants to help others. On the last day of the ski week when he and Olivia spend their time in the basement, Lorenzo had promised her that they would keep in touch and see each other again in the future. He says that this is the first time he had ever felt alive in his entire life, and I think it is because Olivia's arrival had given him hope to make friends and improve himself in different ways. The intense relationship established between Olivia and Lorenzo had changed Lorenzo positively; it changed his personality from introversive to out going, and gave him hope and goals to make friends and live a better life.

Similar to Me And You, the movie the Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe shows how an intense friendship can change someone's personality and make him mature; just like Edmund in the movie, who changed from a selfish, cowardly and childish betrayer to a strong leader who cares about others after establishing an intense friendship with Aslan, the true king of Narnia. Edmund was a kid who lacks attention from others and sometimes feeling ignored; he laughed at Lucy when she said there's a world in the wardrobe, "[mocking Lucy] Find any new countries in the cupboard?"(The Lion, The Witch And The Wardrobe) He tried to say things sarcastically for gaining attention from the others all the time, but it did not seem to be working. After the four siblings realized that Narnia does exist, Edmund decided to believe the queen that he met on his own and bring his siblings to the castle. He thought that the queen would treat his family members as nice as how she treated him, and then they would pay their attention on him which makes him feel not ignored. But his thoughts were too naive; after he went back to the castle, he was then imprisoned by the queen because instead of not bringing his siblings here, he brought a news that the last king Aslan was back. For saving Edmund from the witch(queen), Aslan sacrificed his life and rescued Edmund, which made Edmund feel really ashamed. It is the first time that Edmund had been paying attention to, and the price of it is so expensive that he couldn't even afford; tolerance and honest had secretly grown in his heart after Aslan's death. When Aslan came alive, he met Edmund and became very good friends with him, which encourages Edmund to be braver and eventually made him an excellent fighter and leader. He gave Edmund the feeling of being cared and attached importance to, which makes Edmund less sarcastic and acerb. Because of Edmund's change, they won the battle with the witch, which enclosed all of the sibling's relationship and made Edmund more confident. The change that occurred on Edmund was all made by Aslan; he gave him the feeling of being an important person to others, which changed Edmund from an acerb and childish boy to a tolerant and mature man.

The two stories are pretty similar that the two characters both changed and improved their personalities after established an intense relationship with the others, but they are different because in Me And You, Olivia is a pretty negative person and in Narnia, while Aslan is a really positive character. Lorenzo changed because his sympathy to his sister's symptoms had aroused, because he didn't want to see his sister in pain after the few days that they had been together. The fact of Olivia's suffering had either brought Lorenzo suffer too; it is very hard for him to see someone in pain and not helping her because of the special relationship they had. Edmund had a great change in behaviors and thoughts because of the appearing of Aslan; he is the first one to give Edmund attention and the feeling of being important, which made Edmund less sarcastic or acerb and became a more mature man eventually. The changes that occurred on Lorenzo and Edmund are all caused by the intense relationship; even if they are in different ways, they still changed the person involved positively and improved them in their personality.

No matter how the person that has a relationship with you is, he/she could truly change your personality and make you a better person. Olivia was definitely not a positive person to the majority of society, but throughout the relationship with Lorenzo, she helped him to find his hopes, goals, wishes, and his optimistic sides that improves his thoughts, personality and behavior. Even though Aslan is not a person, the friendship established between him and Edmund had also deeply changed Edmund's thoughts and ways of facing problems and different situations. An intense relationship can be established between anyone; it is what people use to expel sadness, loneliness and even pessimism.



After editing in class:(italics lost in the process of copying and pasting with iPad)

Lillian Xu
English II
Ms Guarino
Feb 24th, 2016
                                                            The Magic To Change
          What can a friendship bring to people? A strong and intense friendship can usually improve a person from a lot of aspects, his personality, his habits and even his principles; it is clearly shown in the novel Me And You and the movie The Lion, The Witch and The Wardrobe. In the novel Me And You, Lorenzo was an antisocial boy who did not have any relationship with people other than his parents or grandma; but after he met Olivia, who is his half sister, her sickness because addiction to drugs had aroused Lorenzo's sympathy and hopes to be a more optimistic person. Similar to Lorenzo, Edmund is also one of the main character in the movie The Lion, The Witch and The Wardrobe; he had changed from a selfish and improvident boy that only cared about his own benefit to a real strong and sagacious emperor of Narnia after Aslan, the true king of Narnia sacrificed himself for saving Edmund's life and establishing a true deep friendship with him. These two stories tell us that a true relationship with others is very precious; no matter what kind of person or race he is, they could still change you slightly and eventually through their love and friendship.
          Lorenzo, the protagonist in the novel Me And You, is a teenage boy who changed from an introversive kid who didn't care about anyone to a boy who has love, hope and determination after establishing a relationship with Olivia, his half sister. It shows how an intense relationship can give a person hope and change his personality entirely. In this novel, Lorenzo was a kid with some mental disorders. He did not care about anyone else instead of his parents and his grandma, and didn't know how to make friends. Even though he was very smart, he still couldn't handle his emotion especially his rage. He pretended to be a wasp that "had managed to trick ... all [of the others], integrating perfectly with the waspian society"(Ammaniti 37) in his school in order to make his mother satisfy about him making friends. After he met Olivia who was his half sister and spent the whole week with her in the basement, a huge change had occurred on him. It says in the book that after he saw Olivia feeling very suffering, he "hugged her and leaned [his] forehead against her neck, [his] nose on her collarbone, and [he] burst into tears"(Ammaniti 110). This was the first time of him thinking and caring about someone who was not his parents or grandma. He started to care for others that are not related to him, and he wanted to help others. On the last day of the ski week when he and Olivia spend their time in the basement, Lorenzo had promised her that they would keep in touch and see each other again in the future. He said that this was the first time he had ever felt alive in his entire life, and I think it was because Olivia's arrival had given him hope to make friends and improve himself in different ways. The intense relationship established between Olivia and Lorenzo had changed Lorenzo positively; it changed his personality from introversive to out going, and gave him hope and goals to make friends and live a better life.
          Similar to Me And You, the movie The Lion, The Witch and The Wardrobe shows how an intense friendship can change someone's personality and make him mature; just like Edmund in the movie, who changed from a selfish, cowardly and childish betrayer to a strong leader who cares about others after establishing an intense friendship with Aslan, the true king of Narnia. Edmund was a kid who lacked attention from others and sometimes felt ignored; he laughed at Lucy when she said there's a world in the wardrobe, "[mocking Lucy] Find any new countries in the cupboard?"(The Lion, The Witch And The Wardrobe) He tried to say things sarcastically for gaining attention from the others all the time, but it did not seem to be working. After the four siblings realized that Narnia does exist, Edmund decided to believe the queen that he met on his own and bring his siblings to the castle. He thought that the queen would treat his family members as nice as how she treated him, and then they would pay attention to him which made him feel not ignored. But his thoughts were too naive; after he went back to the castle, he was then imprisoned by the queen because instead of not bringing his siblings here, he brought a news that the last king Aslan was back. For saving Edmund from the witch(queen), Aslan sacrificed his life and rescued Edmund, which made Edmund feel really ashamed. It is the first time that Edmund was paid attention to by others, and the price of it was so expensive that he couldn't even afford; tolerance and honest had secretly grown in his heart after Aslan's death. When Aslan came alive, he met Edmund and became very good friends with him, which encouraged Edmund to be braver and eventually made him an excellent fighter and leader. He gave Edmund the feeling of being cared and attached importance to, which made Edmund less sarcastic and acerb. Because of Edmund's change, they won the battle with the witch, which enclosed all of the sibling's relationship and made Edmund more confident. The change that occurred on Edmund was all made by Aslan; he gave him the feeling of being an important person to others, which changed Edmund from an acerb and childish boy to a tolerant and mature man.
          The two stories are pretty similar that the two characters both changed and improved their personalities after established an intense relationship with the others, but they are different because in Me And You, Olivia is a pretty negative person and in Narnia, while Aslan is a really positive character. Lorenzo changed because his sympathy to his sister's symptoms had aroused, because he didn't want to see his sister in pain after the few days that they had been together. The fact of Olivia's suffering had either brought Lorenzo suffer too; it is very hard for him to see someone in pain and not helping her because of the special relationship they had. Edmund had a great change in behaviors and thoughts because of the appearing of Aslan; he is the first one to give Edmund attention and the feeling of being important, which made Edmund less sarcastic or acerb and became a more mature man eventually. The changes that occurred on Lorenzo and Edmund are all caused by the intense relationship; even if they are in different ways, they still changed the person involved positively and improved them in their personality.
          No matter how the person that has a relationship with you is, he/she could truly change your personality and make you a better person. Olivia was definitely not a positive person to the majority of society, but throughout the relationship with Lorenzo, she helped him to find his hopes, goals, wishes, and his optimistic sides that improves his thoughts, personality and behavior. Even though Aslan is not a person, the friendship established between him and Edmund had also deeply changed Edmund's thoughts and ways of facing problems and different situations. An intense relationship can be established between anyone; it is what people use to expel sadness, loneliness and even pessimism.

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