My favorite sentence in my first draft is "An intense relationship can be established between anyone; it is what people use to expel sadness, loneliness and even pessimism." It concludes the whole paper, and extends the concept of how relationship could help people. It tells the readers that an intense relationship with others, no matter how the person is, can bring people hopes and get rid of the bad feelings; it is beneficial for people to make new friends because this is an efficient way to expel boredom and loneliness, which could make people feel sad about.
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